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Godfall End



I am a sucker for good endings kthnxbai

AHhhh~ Okay so I'm not even gonna start with how stressful this round was and I had to take out so many things just in order to keep up with the due date but this was an OCT I'll never regret entering, it's hit second place for my favorite OCT's I've competed in~

GO READ ~Rekyrem' s!!! IT WILL MAKE YOUR KOKORO CRY OMG IT WAS GOOD! [link]

Deleted Scenes:

Altri and Twi find Marina (Altri’s girlfriend) in the junkyard where she was is with Luke and some of the other random side characters to contestants OC’s and they were able to get away or fend themselves from the corrupted cloud bunnies but ended up trapped in one of the old junk clubs. (Didn’t have time to add this.)

Later they find out that some of the contestants of such have fused with a corrupted cloud bunny and their powers/life energy is being used by Marina (main villain) to gain more power. (This was replaced with Marina consuming Krevor and Malware)

Mr. Brooks was suppose to become a rider (flying) but decided that no matter how much I played with him, I couldn’t fit him in the round sadly.

The final battle where Marina was defeated was redone three times, First attempt was that Kasey was to forgive her and by doing so her body would being to disintegrate as forgiveness negates hatred. (Thought this was corny so didn’t do it.) Second attempt was going to be something similar to what happens in Paprika when Atsuko consumes Seijirō, but with Kasey consuming Marina and becoming an adult like Atsuko does but this would be more of a plot steal than a shout-out so I dumped the idea. Third and final idea I went with another Satoshi Kon idea and made Marina and Kasey directly connected since she is the personification oh his stress.

The final battle was intended to be shit tons longer and have more involvement with Historianna and Rhett but I had only a few hours left to get this thing done.

Krevor and Malware were suppose to be also found along with Kasey since all three got consumed and then when everything went back to normal they would be band from GF but that’s okay cause they’d probably go off and kill some other and better world. lol